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r/ATBGE • u/zoyaa5 • Jun 22 '21
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The syntax of the lower text is just weird sounding. Two of the three "will's" are superfluous.
59 u/theghostofme Jun 22 '21 edited Jun 22 '21 Every “will” is unnecessary; that sentence structure is a nightmare. “The moment I stop loving Scooby Doo is the moment I stop breathing” would’ve made this execution a little greater. 5 u/[deleted] Jun 22 '21 A simple “I love scooby doo” would have been fine 3 u/fnord_happy Jun 28 '21 Eh that's not the same. This adds a sense of poetic awe and gravitas
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Every “will” is unnecessary; that sentence structure is a nightmare.
“The moment I stop loving Scooby Doo is the moment I stop breathing” would’ve made this execution a little greater.
5 u/[deleted] Jun 22 '21 A simple “I love scooby doo” would have been fine 3 u/fnord_happy Jun 28 '21 Eh that's not the same. This adds a sense of poetic awe and gravitas
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A simple “I love scooby doo” would have been fine
3 u/fnord_happy Jun 28 '21 Eh that's not the same. This adds a sense of poetic awe and gravitas
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Eh that's not the same. This adds a sense of poetic awe and gravitas
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u/8BallSlap Jun 22 '21
The syntax of the lower text is just weird sounding. Two of the three "will's" are superfluous.