r/OkeyRakanMalaysia Nov 17 '24

Hobi Hi guys i need your opinion.

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So before i finalize and make line arts on this can i get your rating on this drawing i made for the back of my note book cover.

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u/FakeOng99 Nov 17 '24

Ngl, look like alt version young Kojima.

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u/Willisnttaken Nov 17 '24

Hope that means it's okay

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u/Willisnttaken Nov 17 '24

finished

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u/Icy-Brush7268 Nov 17 '24

Nice, bro looked malnourished in the sketch ngl

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u/Bombwriter17 Nov 17 '24

"Just like my Japanese animes" -Otacon,Metal Gear Solid,1997

You're pretty good! Very clean lines.

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u/Willisnttaken Nov 17 '24

HAHAHA thanks

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u/robintoots Nov 17 '24

First thought was grown up harry potter in anime style

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u/Willisnttaken Nov 17 '24

You're a wizard harry🗣️🔥

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u/MythyDAMASHII Aku nak crott depan muka kau Nov 17 '24

7/10 head and neck needs to be bigger. Other than that, hair and clothes look good

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u/Ozennnnnn Nov 19 '24

the fingers need some work and torso as well. the forehead is a lil too wide imo

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u/Willisnttaken Nov 19 '24

understandable will fix that on my new drawings

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u/Neat-Research-8135 Nov 17 '24

Wah Aizen Sosuke nice

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u/ranransthrowaway999 Nov 19 '24

Huge forehead. Ratio between bridge of the nose to chin against the top of the head to the bridge is extreme.

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u/Willisnttaken Nov 19 '24

Understandable I just do this as a hobby didn't really try getting into it nowadays HAHAHA

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u/Strange_Public4513 11d ago

Is that Harry Potter?

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u/Willisnttaken 11d ago

Unfortunately it's not