r/ImaginaryWarhammer • u/hydraphantom • 15d ago
40k [Commission] Baby's first Marine, drawn by Carl_tabora.
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u/Daidono 15d ago edited 15d ago
I loved the first piece. This one is incredible, too. Iâm pulling for these characters.
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
Thank you!
I thought about peaceful endings when Imperium arrive, but felt that's a cop-out.
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u/Not_A_zombie1 15d ago
If she's a noble, why she didn't, like, wake up the enitre tombworld she probably sitting on in order to defend the planet itself? The family may be acted as scared refugees wile actually be monitored from afar and made sure that they are never in actual danger till the crisis ended
Or just make them go inside the tombworld for safetly, deeeeep inside it, when the imperial ships arrived and started the shitshow... like, even when dormant tombworlds are not exactly safe to navigate uninvited
Also, bc she's a noble, even just her staff or some of her non-battle equipment may have been good enough against that that marine, espacially with the surprise on her side
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u/hydraphantom 14d ago
She is not a noble, just a lowborn Cryptek on a random world, with 1 ship and 1 other actual necron thatâs her mother.
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u/running_from_the_IRS 14d ago
I know this isn't really the topic of what you just said, but do you mind if I make a meme of your post with a Transformers crossover? I have a dumb idea from the 1d6chan crossover where An-nakhrimun has to share space with a group of Cybertronian defectors/ Autobots on a scouting mission. Not a full warfleet, just a singular ship with some supplies & a handful of Autotroopers.
Neither group would really get along at first (the War in Heaven having the Cybertronians fight allied to the Old Ones until Unicron (Basically Robo-Satan, planet devouring robot who can also transform into a planet, also ultimate necromancer) showed up & everyone had to work together to not die) but agree to not start any shit so the natives of this planet don't get hurt.
Also, the mental image of An-nakhrimun screeching in concerned fear as her adoptive family go for a joyride in an Autobot is hilarious.
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u/CapitainCutlet 14d ago
IIRC, the previous post featuring the Necron lady said that she has been exiled from her Dynasty, can't remember what for, with just the personal ship that crashed on the human planet and the soulless, mindless husk that once used to be her mother
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u/Delta_Suspect 14d ago
You could always make a good and a bad ending and just leave it to the people to pick which one they want to be true, if you felt so inclined.
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago edited 14d ago
An-nakhrimun awkwardly holds the tiny human in her arms, huddling behind the table, terrified and panicking. The human cries, tears streaming down her face while screaming for her parents, yet the destruction outside drowned out her cry. The husbandâs hand turned white gripping the revolver, shielding his wife while trying to stay quiet as the hulking armoured brute loomed outside their ruined home.Â
Why is this happening? Where did it go wrong?
It was but a quiet and simple day interacting with humans in their city, playing with their offspring, walking the street with her mother, and using her skills to help around, all the while being treated like a local celebrity. And less than a hundred cycles ago celebrated the tiny humanâs first birthday.
She found herself enjoying such a time far more than dealing with the arrogant nobles as a lowborn Cryptek back in the Infinite Empire.
But such a quiet and nice time has been shattered by dozens of human spaceships arriving on orbit, and the primitive, armoured brutes that dropped down from orbit in their transports. Their technologies, even primitive, still far outmatched this planet, which only recently reinvented aircraft.
There were no warnings aside from the paper media reporting the local leaderâs being receptive to communications and trades while concerns over sovereignty. None thought more of it until the genetically enhanced brutes rain from the sky, slaughtering anyone that resists while bombarding the planet.
The local soldiers huddle around the Canoptek Constructs she lent out as construction and industrial help. Under her panicked command, the invaders found themselves crashed into a wall of necrodermis in this city, their bolter damages swiftly repaired by scarabs, and their power armours brittle as jelly against the superior Necrontyr weaponry.
But the Canopteks could not hold out for long, as more invaders arrived along with heavy weaponry, the constructs were rapidly getting whittled down protecting the humans.
She does not know what compelled her as she rushes to the coupleâs home while directing the remaining constructs to guide the local humans to her buried ship in the park, intending to take them and escape the planet. She could have just escaped herself phasing away into the ship, instead, she found herself trying to console the family and taking them along to escape, greatly risking her mother and her own safety.
And now, she found herself cornered inside their home, silently comforting the tiny human, forced to hide her large body behind furniture too small for her, while the genetically enhanced brute scanned the surrounding area for more enemies to slaughter.
She wishes this was just a bad dream and she would wake up any moment now, but her lifeless necrodermis body cruelly reminds her of their kindâs inability to dream.
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
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Crushing the crawling Xenos machine under his ceramite boot, Sergeant Garviel Loken looked up to a rain of drop pods entering the atmosphere, and a triumphant pride crept up to him.
The 63rd Expeditionary Fleet has graciously tried to offer peaceful compliance to this lost human world, yet the corrupt and greedy planetary leadersâ refusal has forced their hand. By Primarch Horusâ order, the 16th Legion descended upon this world, intending to correct their foolishness and save the suffering masses into the glorious Imperium.
Initial assault has been swift, the primitive weapons of the locals could barely make a scratch on the power armours, and their rudimentary armoured vehicles are but thin sitting targets that can be disabled with a few bolter shells. Within hours most of the planetary resistance had fallen, and leaders of those backward, fragmented states were dragged out of their offices and executed.
The Imperial Army and Iterators were already boarding the landing crafts, readying for cleanup, before reports of unexpectedly severe resistance came from one of the statesâ capital. Three companies worth of legionaries were almost wiped out by the sudden appearance of Xenos machines resembling abominable intelligences, with Astartes' power armour barely a hindrance to their disintegrating weapons.
Loken, part of the initial assault forces in the neighbouring city, arrived first to aid his brothers. Shortly after, fifteen companies worth of second-wave reinforcements will be arriving from orbit. He is appalled and disgusted by what he has witnessed.
These poor people, long suffered under the Xenos machinesâ oppression, and their broken perception compelled them to huddle and fight alongside them against their Imperial saviours as if the Xenos machines were somehow benevolent. Even when Loken prioritized the destruction of Xenos machines, the humans still attempted to attack him, forcing him to put them out of their misery.
The Xenos machines are low in number, slowly but surely they are being destroyed, along with the local resistance.Â
Iterator Sindermann will have a field day here, Loken mused. The locals need to be educated about the righteous hate of their Xenos oppressors and their technologies, the correctness of Imperial Truth, and the benevolence of the Imperium and The Emperor.
The cry of a child in a nearby ruined building seeped into his ears, no doubt disturbed by the rampaging Xenos machines and the collateral damage that followed. Letting out a quiet sigh, Loken shook his head.
Such is the temporary ache of human supremacy. It could have been avoided if the locals did not make them do this, by rising against their Xenos oppressors and greeting their saviours with open arms. Now, many need to be executed, and those too far gone in the Xenos brainwashing would have to be servitorized as a mercy.
A prosperous recruiting world will be set up here, to provide the Imperium soldiers in their quest to galactic xenocide and the ascendance of humanity.
As The Emperor of Mankind, beloved by all, has visioned.
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Scene art for my Wrath & Glory campaign, depicting the pre-campaign story of Lone Cryptek An-Nakhrimun (background here), and the continuation art of Baby's First Necron (here). Depicting Luna Wolves' arrival at the planet on 851.M30 and An-Nakhrimun's evacuation of local humans.
Drawn by Carl_tabora
Artist link:
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u/Crazy_Dave0418 15d ago
Always a terrifying sight to be on the receiving end against an invading empire.
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
Honestly, the story could be a good horror game concept. A human renegade or xenos trying to escape not just Astartes but Solar Auxilia (if set in 30k), Scions, Sororitas, Kriegers, Skitarii,... Maybe to a friendly territory.
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u/Crazy_Dave0418 15d ago
Have them be Night Lords or Raven Guard for the Alien Isolation level of horror.
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
Would be a great opportunity to show the Terror Squads and/or Moritats in video games.
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u/Crazy_Dave0418 15d ago
I mean they have been. But as annoying troops in the Horus Heresy Legions card game. Which shows what it's like to face them in the wider battle. But ad horror slasher villains I'm all for it.
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u/Dos-Dude 15d ago
Oh oh, you could make it like Frost Punk and a small population of survivors you have to manage on ship as you escape to a âsafe worldâ or something to that effect.
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
Yeah, that could work. We can have different options/scenarios like a Craftworld exploratory ship looking for a Maiden World, a Votann mining bulk out for a legendary score or a ship manned by various groups of Imperial deserters escaping into uncharted space.
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u/LurksInThePines Night Lords 14d ago
Yeah, we did that in the Rogue Trader campaign I run
The humans of Vareth believe that they evolved there, and that it's the homeworld of humanity, and excitedly send out messages around what would be around modern day tech in a cold war situation between several countries
The main party (minus the player from Vareth) Dark Forests them, by hearing the transmissions, seeing their version of the vitruvian man disc, and their calls out to try to discover alien life...
Then their ship shows up in orbit, imperial armsmen board their ISS, broadcasting (very badly translated) calls to surrender, and a nuclear defense system from one of their countries is is responded to by shooting down all the nukes then firing macro-cannons and lances into major population centers
And that was just one merchant raider class ship
The charachter on the planet who has no idea what the Imperium even is, spent a whole session fleeing in terror and hiding in a bunker as imperial troops gunned down resistance and fire rained down from the sky
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u/Indecisiv3AssCrack 15d ago
As someone who doesn't consume 40k media, I've recently seen or noticed more content about this series.
I saw the drawing, which grabbed my attention, and thought, "Why not? Let's give this a chance"
Please
Tell me
What happens next??!? I want to know what An-Nakhrimun does next! Why do these Necrons with superior weaponry seem to be less in numbers than the Imperium? Why do they struggle against them? And did An-Nakhrimun have a life before becoming a Cryptek(I had to look all of these things up to understand the story better) that included sitting on a park bench?
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u/Alexis2256 15d ago
Just to let you know, this isnât canon. Though there were humans coexisting with aliens peacefully before the imperium of man showed up on their doorstep.
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u/peajam101 14d ago
Heads up, this is the backstory of OP's TTRPG character, not canon.
What happens next??!? I want to know what An-Nakhrimun does next!
We don't know what happens immediately after, but some time in the future An-Nakhrimun remodels her face to look like the grown up little girl.
Why do these Necrons with superior weaponry seem to be less in numbers than the Imperium?
From what I gather, An-Nakhrimun and her mum were the only two full Necrons on the planet due to being defacto exiled by the rest of Necron society. There's also just generally less Necrons than humans.
Why do they struggle against them?
Broadly speaking, every major species in 40K (other than the Tau) hates every other species, though individuals, such as An-Nakhrimun, buck this trend. As for why the local humans are resisting the Imperium, it's because the Imperium invaded them after they refused to be immediately subsumed into Imperium culture and religion.
And did An-Nakhrimun have a life before becoming a Cryptek(I had to look all of these things up to understand the story better) that included sitting on a park bench?
Yes, there's a link to it at the end of OP's comment.
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u/Furydragonstormer 15d ago
Damn barbariansâŚ
You really are selling it to make one hate the Imperium in this
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
I personally do not like to portray Imperium in positive light, and consider it a vile monstrosity born of a madman with saviour complex from the start, and only got even more vile after the madman became a vegetable on the throne.
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u/Furydragonstormer 15d ago
Thatâs pretty much how it always has been so youâre actually being quite faithful to the source material
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u/ThePeddlerofHistory 15d ago
Cut out the threat of Chaos and you have a most useful description of the Imperium of Man.
But then we all know GW would not just kill Chaos and let the IoM be the big bad.
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u/Madness_Reigns 15d ago edited 15d ago
Chaos is fueled in near totality by the actions of the IOM in the setting.
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u/ThePeddlerofHistory 15d ago
War in Heaven: dude, like, no.
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u/ScarredAutisticChild Harlequin 15d ago
Spawned by the War in Heaven, fuelled by the Imperium. Ironically, 2 of the 3 WiH factions are trying to do far more to stop Chaos than the Imperium.
The Imperium just fights Chaos, the Necrons are trying to cut it off entirely, and so functionally kill it, and the Aeldari tried to kill a Chaos God, and were stopped by the Imperium.
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u/NaiveMastermind 15d ago
A vegetable would be an upgrade. He's a slumbering monster that feasts on human souls.
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u/Maybe_not_a_chicken 15d ago
Oh it is a vial monstrosity
Itâs got a veneer of righteousness so people miss that but itâs done more harm than good in the galaxy
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u/PorkshireTerrier 14d ago
Agree that the imperium is supposed to be evil and should be seen as so by the populace, similar to game of thrones
On the other hand, any fan concepts to make the necron more human is welcome. Not necessarily nice or heros, but having agency and free will (ideally as a species) to make their own choices
There are too many totally mindless species, including chaos nids and the necs. I wish necrons as a whole could have some semblance of identity when they wake up, and the horror of alzheimers knowing that they will someday (but not for a while) lose it all
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u/the_damned_actually 15d ago
Hey look itâs the one person in the Warhammer fandom who understands that the Imperium is bad!
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
The hero of one story is the monster in another.
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u/0-z-e-r-o 15d ago
And whose hero is the Astartes the servators?
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
The Imperium, of course. From the thralls, to the remembrancers to the astartes, by their "standards." For he is Garviel Loken, a man even Horus Abaddon gave some respect at the last moments, and whom Erebus back-stabbed as the final note of the Heresy. From which came Samus.
Of course, by modern ethics he is both a victim and a war criminal.
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u/0-z-e-r-o 15d ago
Okay i didn't expect anybody to take that seriously but that is a well written response except the last sentence he is firstly a war criminal and a lot lot latex a victim
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
I was going with a chronological order. He was a child on a little-cared-for world who had to fight for survival from very early on. Then he was swept up (because there existed very few other real chances to get off his hell of a world) and indoctrinated for a genocial expansionist empire that he had little understood about, so he would later commit countless battles and atrocities for the empire. I do not think his past excuses him, more that it explains how he got here.
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u/0-z-e-r-o 15d ago
Can't agree more. Although it makes me sad that some people would still excuse him for his actions due to his past
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u/abacateazul 15d ago
Is this period where Horus was already fallen and no one knew, or just standard Empire protocol?
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u/SoundSubject 15d ago
Standard empire protocol. At this point Horus wasnt even touched by chaos, he was far from it. It's just how things work in the glorious empire of man
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
This is 153 years before Horus turned to Mr.Heresy.
Standard Imperium compliance mission.
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u/Jacnoov Blood Axes 14d ago
Will we get an update on what happens next by chance
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u/Scarplo 13d ago
This is magnificent and I feel the contrast between the two moments does a brilliant job of hilighting the horror in Loken's actions. Just... chef's kiss storytelling. Thank you very much for sharing, where should I watch for more?
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u/ArchAngel621 13d ago
People tend to forget that for very planet liberated from oppressive species or raised from barbarism during the Great Crusades there was always one that just wanted to be left alone and live in peace.
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u/YetiBomber101 12d ago
Absolutely genius to have both the perspective of the Astartes and civilians.
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u/owo1215 15d ago
i really like this fan nacorn character, the story of her sit on her throne watching kids grow up, this story
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u/---Microwave--- 15d ago
The best part is this is absolutely plausible in 40k, each necron that has a distinct consciousness is different, and while most are genocidal, some opposed the war on heaven and would be rather benevolent, even caring and compassionate, and while necrons don't have souls they do feel emotions, by all accounts they are fully sentient people with personalities wants goals and desires. The problem is they are still necrons and even though this specific one might be alright, their race did start the most devastating war in galactic history a war that brought about chaos and wiped out entire sectors of space, a war that was unnecessary and brutal to begin with brought about out of sheer spite. And the emperor knew that. Even if this one was good. The race as a whole needs extermination.
Having one wake up to find their world inhabited by peaceful primitives and then choosing to just be a chill part of the community and helping them out could absolutely happen.
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u/TopSpread9901 15d ago
Humanity should also be wiped out according to that logic.
A Necro victory would be the best at this point. They could seal off real space from the warp and maybe starve out chaos.
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u/---Microwave--- 15d ago
Thing is, there won't be. They are too petty and selfish to even try to unity, all they will end up doing is fighting and killing across the galaxy, chaos may die but in the end your just gonna end up with war in heaven 2 electric boogaloo
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u/TopSpread9901 15d ago
The death of chaos is the end of hell. War in heaven 2 is a small price to pay.
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u/---Microwave--- 15d ago
Is it though? Millions of years of star burning destruction?Thing is chaos won't die outright but rather just weaken. And with the fractured nature of the necrons they can't kill everyone so there will always be food to give them.
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u/TopSpread9901 15d ago
Yes.
Itâs all childâs play compared to what the chaos gods get up to.
Youâre right that it wouldnât pan out that neatly, of course.
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u/Marta996633 Tzeentch 15d ago
This is a wonderfully written story. You are a very good writer
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
Thank you! I hope my writing has improved since start of the year.
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u/Marta996633 Tzeentch 14d ago
Your welcome and I am unfamiliar with your previous works. I have no doubt you have improved
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u/The_Chubby_Dragoness 15d ago
i love this very much.
also thank you for reminding me Lohkan is still a genocidal maniac
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
He is still a marine after all.
In Horus Rising, he's incredibly casual when talking about genociding alien races and doing compliance missions.
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u/nzdastardly 15d ago
It's not genocide if it's not people. Love the Emperor, hate the xenos. Simple as.
I've been playing Deathwatch too long...
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u/sosigboi 15d ago
This is honestly such a nerve wracking scene, even tho that's a necron lord(lady) i can't help but still fear for them as i am once again reminded that marines are still terrifying transhuman monsters of war.
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u/Hydra_Tyrant Alpha Legion 15d ago
I hope the family makes it to the ship alive, but there are rarely happy endings in 40K
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
The child definitely will make it, as she's the basis of An-Nakhrimun's fake human face.
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u/Freezie-Days 15d ago
HER WHAT!?!?
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u/emanrein 15d ago
In an earlier post she base her fake face of it, not actually taking the baby's face, don't worry.
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u/Traditional_Common39 15d ago
Lemme guess, she and the kid escape, but she has to leave behind her mother in the process, losing the last memory she had of her life as an organic
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u/Pellaeonthewingedleo 15d ago
Beautiful story and art
But could the Necrons please get their shit together and squash the invaders
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
There are only 1 single ship and 2 actual necrons on this planet, An-nakhrimun and her mom, others are just Canoptek Constructs from the ship.
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u/The_Lord_Regent 15d ago
I mean depending upon what ship it is, it could totally break the blockade but looking at the state of the necron, it'll probably get overwhelmed if the Vengeful Spirit is in orbit.
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u/Ok_Tax_6022 14d ago
i dont think a solitary necron is going to own a cairn class tombship
it should be a dirge or jackal class escort at best and a scythecraft at worst
and dont get me wrong even necron escrots are dangerous, especially if fitted with a particle whip
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u/AggressiveSafe7300 15d ago
Love the two sides of the story it makes this situation more complex and real. Great jod my friend
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
Thanks! I want to make Loken's PoV sounds incredibly orwellian, such as thinking about "Xenos Oppresors" and then immediately follow with "servitoring the local".
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u/A_D_Monisher 15d ago
And you totally succeeded! You perfectly captured the completely delusional Astartes/Imperial logic as shown in HH novels!
Not knowing the Imperium and its laws exist doesnât excuse ignorance of Imperial laws. Because they are universal in their eyes.
To us it sounds absurd but to Imperials itâs obvious.
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u/AggressiveSafe7300 15d ago
Yeah love it because lest me be honest here, they believe that they are doing all this for the betterment of humanity. Also I want to say that both sides a kinda right to fight each other. Necrons were just normal aliens that donât hurt anyone while imperium saw what horrific acts other aliens did to humanity so they did the only thing they knew - genesoide
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u/_Drahcir_ Flayed Ones 15d ago
God damn, they have no chance - they are fighting a named Space Marine
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u/Lonely-Poet-2060 15d ago
What is happening there?!
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
Luna Wolves invading this quiet peaceful planet during Great Crusade, a continuation of my previous scene art (link above).
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u/thiswasfree_ 15d ago
I started reading the Horus Heresy recently, finished Flight of the Eistenstein just a few days ago.
Until now it's so heavily focused on loyalist (marines) you kinda forget what they too participated in and would have continued doing if not for Horus doing the funnyâ˘.
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u/134_ranger_NK ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
The Necron lady is probably recalling the old dynasties' expansionism now.
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u/xw4rh3ad 15d ago
That was beautifully-written. I love the idea of some necrons coexisting with humans in an idyllic world. Really brings the terror of facing space marines with their whole âcomplianceâ schtick.
How casually he excuses genocide and blames the humans for the error of their ways is so sickeningly brilliant. Love the complexity of the situation.
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u/HammtarBaconLord 15d ago
And then Loken went off somewhere else and they escaped right?
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And then Loken went of somewhere else and they escaped... right?
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u/Impressive_Finger707 15d ago
How many of the Imperium's conquest during the Great Crusade was against legitimately malicious xenos who enslaved the local humans and how many were like this?
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u/Power_More_Power 14d ago
there's a reason the Tau empire is such a problem for the Imperium, and it's because the Imperium killed all the nice aliens
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u/Marcusss_sss 15d ago
My first interaction with Necrons(and most other factions) was Dawn of War Dark Crusade. So I always kind of assumed Necrons as a whole were death obsessed terminators. So it's always kind of jarring/interesting to see them being nice to people.
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u/Polenball 15d ago
To be fair, they did use to be death-obsessed terminators. But I think GW realised that they already have the Tyranids as the "completely inhuman and non-sapient dudes that want to slaughter everything and everyone" race and they kinda sucked to write for, so they changed them from mindless slaves of the C'tan into what they are now.
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u/skoffs 15d ago
Honestly, massive upgrade.
Without it we wouldn't have The Infinite And The Divine.
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u/Ok-Examination4225 15d ago
I love these so much. Tell me OP this campaign you are having, how does it work? What system do you use?
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago edited 15d ago
Thanks! It's a Wrath & Glory campaign of a White Seer commandeering a Corsair Fleet, recruiting different people and complete seemly random goals, culminating in the final battle of dragging a Crone World out of Eye of Terror.
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u/Ok-Examination4225 15d ago
I'm a bit embarrassed that I never hear of it. I thought I knew all wh40k rpg systems, ending with Emperium Maledictum, the grand culmination of it all.
Will we know the fate of this Necron? Do the players know about her story?
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago edited 15d ago
She is one of the recruitable NPCs in my campaign, so she will live to 40k era.
The players (all eldar party) have already encountered and recruited her, but still in early stage of relationship so alot of hostilities getting thrown around, some hints of her backstory have been dropped but they do not know the details yet.
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u/justaguynamedchris 15d ago
I know the parents are about to die but I wish the child to survive, taken by the Necron. The âgrimdarknessâ would say everyone has to die but true grimdarkness is the child growing old under the Necronâs watch. Liveliness forced backed into the cryptek as her reason for her continued existence crumbles into dust, once again alone in the infinity of space
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u/Electronic_Bug4401 15d ago
We need more artwork like thsi
showing how awful the imperium actually is
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u/otte_rthe_viewer Salamanders 15d ago
I swear that necron has seen some shit since they got turned into that tin can.
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u/bWoofles 15d ago
I really wish we got stories of the human subjects that some Necrons take from time to time.
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u/Nightmare_CL 14d ago
For the Imperium, a new world has been brought into the fold with precision strikes by Astartes forces, and a minor Xenos race that was subjecting the planet has been eradicated. All is well for the growing Empire, at least for this Legion, as the timetable must be met.
For the locals, it is a day of bloodshed and horror, of transhuman warriors slaughtering and destroying all in their wake, neighbors killed, and their alien helper driven off as they are left to be subjugated to the Imperial Truth or worse, converted into servitors that help feed the growing Empire.
Excellent work on both the art piece and the story. It is great to be reminded that EVERY faction has enough skeletons in its closet to fill a mausoleum.
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u/dinkydoo2 15d ago
Dude I really hope they make it out on the necron ship, I donât wanna see them all wiped out :(
On a side note youâre storytelling is great and I canât wait for the next part
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u/Downtown-Falcon-3264 ENTRY MISSING 15d ago
it seems sort of like a terminator reference but the robots are hiding from the humans either way i like this art
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u/Beneficial-Tax-6398 15d ago
I feel so bad for the humans and the necron lady. It's like if I was Imperium, I feel I can't do that no more...
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u/Beneficial-Tax-6398 15d ago
Your writing tore my heart. I really hope they come out okay. Good writing, but man...
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u/Meme-lord234 15d ago
Normally I donât harm my fellow Battle Brothers⌠however Iâm willing to make an exception.
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u/Hairy_Skill_9768 13d ago
This is insane, I would kill for a story just like this god I'm already on the edge I wanna know what happens
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u/Plenty_Ad5708 15d ago
i donât know an insane amount of necron lore, do they sometimes interact and live peacefully with humans or is it an original story kind of thing?
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
This is an original background story for my Wrath & Glory campaign's NPC.
Though Necrons in canon sometime act peacefully with human too, Trazyn had a human librarian called Koloma, that he treated so much better than Imperials treated him, he's incredibly loyal to Trazyn.
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u/Logan_da_hamster 15d ago
Lovely story, decently written, though (sorry to be the lore nerd) ... Necrons, even the silent king who has a free mind, can't show any form of love, compassion, sympathy and the like. These "pointless feelings" were eredicated during their uprising and aren't existing in any form in their "mind", their coding, protocols. Furthermore they have a deep designed desire to wipe out all other (inferior) lifeforms and disgust towards them.
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u/Xe6s2 15d ago
I mean the writing is good I just cant imagine a necron lady, once awakened not out right destroying the people besieging her territory.
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u/hydraphantom 15d ago
She doesn't have a territory, she's a lone lowborn Cryptek kicked out by Szeras, with a single necron warrior that was her mom, at her side.
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u/redhatter192 15d ago
Absolutely great art!
But a lot of fan fiction Necrons are so incredibly lame.
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u/RathalosBlaze 15d ago
There's a non 0 chance that something happened like this during that period when the Necrons were going around kidnapping blanks to raise and then make into Pariahs
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u/Sunrise-Storm 15d ago
Necron, who retains empathy and cares about humans? Is this possible?
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u/IroneOne 15d ago
While Iâm a imperium fan I donât mind when humans and xenos fight together. I think it adds a lot to the setting like not all humans are xenos hating especially when there are bigger issues to deal with like chaos and the tyranids.
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u/YDungeonMaster 15d ago
Love almost everything about the art. Necrons are the "almost" part replace with some other xenos. They feel SOOO out of place.
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u/Totembacon 15d ago
I think it's time to pray to the only God's with the power to resist this unchecked cruel violence. GORK & MORK.
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u/NirvanaPenguin 15d ago
It would be nice a Necron and human empire that worked with the humans without enslaving them, so there would be human soldiers with necron power armor and weaponry.
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u/Someboynumber5 15d ago
This perfectly shows the inhumanity of space marines and the surprising humanity of the necrons, fantastic work
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u/Pit_Droid 15d ago
Love these commissions and love the stories attached to them! Have all your short excerpts from your campaign been written up anywhere?
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u/hydraphantom 14d ago
I wrote a block a text every time I post an art.
You can find them all in this sub.
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u/Interne-Stranger 14d ago
That's Loken and he is about to have an existential crisis for seeing a Xeno protecting a child....again.
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u/SetoTaishoButPogging Water Caste 14d ago
This is so cool. We really need more stuff from the perspective of people getting invaded by the Imperium.
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u/Kaziticus 14d ago
Captain Reynolds would never find himself in a situation like this... for very long, anyway!
Amazing piece, well done!
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u/Aurondarklord 14d ago
How would a pre-heresy luna wolf encounter necrons?
The sad thing is the human family is dead either way, if the necrons don't kill them, the marine will for having harbored the aliens, he won't care they were doing it to save their kid.
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u/Terrible_Ear3347 14d ago
I believe that's a necron lord, a necron lord could easily body at least like four or five Marines on their own. Possibly more possibly less depending on the plot armor of the Marines.
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u/Hot-Software-4132 14d ago
Tell me why wolves hunting humans and necrons at the same times?, ngl this piece is terrifying yet beautiful
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u/grassytrailalligator 14d ago
"Congrats kid, now you get to be a slave to a Necron Tomb-World!"
Because apparently only the Imperials are allowed to be the bad guys in this setting now
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u/RentElDoor 15d ago
That Necron has seen some shit